Strong first half, weak second half.
smiling for half of them,
but last few parts seemed half-assed.
Nearly Ready For Occupation by Danny Adams
Newsflash: humanity has more baggage than moving to a new planet will fix. Shrug.
The Last Alchemist by Bruce Boston
This poem is in a pretty sweet-looking box, also, it's well written. But the sentiment bugs the hell out of me. I'm with Feynman.
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