Tuesday, November 23, 2010
Xenoaesthetics by F.J. Bergmann
Nice language, a touch of amusing imagery, but I'm not sure I can get behind the concept. A species who doesn't use adjectives or appreciate beauty is not just secretly desperate for it. Stop anthropomorphizing very alien aliens!
Sailor by Mark Rich
Very nice rhythm and wordplay about a solar-sail ship leaving Earth behind.
Blueprint For a Domed City by Jessica Taylor
A beautiful, safe, organized domed city is pretty awful in the grand scheme. Much like the turns-of-phrase in this poem.
Mark Rich is the clear standout this issue, nailing both language and concept. Bergmann has the language only, and Taylor murders even that. But I'm still not sure Sailor is good enough for any awards.